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by ude dude


Hey this is Just a stupid poem

There once was a girl called Louisa,
Who was definitely not out to please ya,
She'd give you a hug,
Then out come the thug,
Who'd beat you just to bruise ya.

:D its Crappy but hey :twisted:

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Sat Aug 20, 2005 4:45 am
Elizabeth wrote a review...



Somewhere, at sometime, in some place, to somebody
their dog just exploded as I read this

GODDAMNIT limericks are so hilarios...

oough that hurt to read... there was one I wrote
And I cried when I read it... over and over again
this
was
too
funny
for
any words but these:

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh THE AGONY OF THIS LIMERICK uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh I DON'T KNOW A LOUISA
ugh

Great job though :D




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Sat Aug 20, 2005 4:30 am
Fireweed wrote a review...



ummm... well, ya it is kinda crappy, but its so crappy its funny!!! :D i dodnt know what to do for the poll, cuz its definitely funny, but im not sure its the shizney, so ya...




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Tue Jul 12, 2005 4:38 pm
Lollipop says...



What you tryin'! Hey judy! Cool little poem!





I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.
— Dr. Seuss